Monday 2 October 2017

Starting with the Basics


                 Two men have been sentenced long prison terms for importing several thousand kilos of cocaine into Canada Ontario. they was sentenced because they brought in nearly 2,500 kilos of cocaine into Ontario in 2013 . Yes I think the lead is effective because it gets straight to the point and tells you all the information u need to know.  Niagara Regional Police spokesman Phil Gavin said “large scale drug investigation”. Yes the most important information is told first because the first thing they said is two men sentenced long prison terms for importing a lot of cocaine into Canada. Yes the story has a good ending because it raps up the whole story and said when the two men got arrested in September 2014. 

https://news.vice.com/story/ontario-men-sentenced-for-importing-coke-amid-crackdown-on-sinaloa-cartel

               Melanie Stambaugh campaigned for reelection, ran into a problem with Facebook and is now being slammed with 44 ethics violations. Melanie is accused of violating campaign finance laws by posting videos of herself serving in the State House, the ethics board said it violated campaign and fined her $35,000. Yes this lead is effective because it gets right to the point and tells you all the information you need to know. This segment originally aired Sept. 12, 2017, on VICE News Tonight on HBO.  Yes the most important information is told first because it said how Melanie got fined 35000 for fines. Yes the story did have a good ending because it raps up the story and said how she raised money to pay her fines   


https://news.vice.com/story/facebook-posts-cost-this-millennial-politician-35000

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